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Review:Liana says:
Sad but lovely chapter. I can understand how Remus feels. I'm having my knee replaced next week and I'm having bittersweet feelings of my own. The knee has caused me nothing but trouble but this is the last week I get to spend with it:) I understand your use of the word "tool" but having lived through 1978 I don't remember that word (there's a typo in a bit but my iPad won't let me change it. There's a 'her' that would be 'his life'.) being around then. I don't object to you using it. I wouldn't have used it here. Addy objected to Patrick making a decision that put her life in danger but isn't that what Luna's mother did when she died? Wasn't she experimenting with a spell? I guess it's all easy to see in hindsight.

Author's Response: I hope the knee replacement went well! Remus had such conflicting feelings in this chapter. Haha, I suppose I'm showing that I was not alive in 1978 by using the word tool. But it fit so well there, so I'll leave it. I suppose Addy did put her life in danger when she experimented with the spell, but for all we know she thought there was very little risk with that and it all just went horribly wrong. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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