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Review:TimeSeer says:
And we get to actually meet Lorelei, as opposed to just hearing about her from everyone because James can't seem to remember anything. When she ran into James and drop the picture! Is that supposed to be foreshadowing? I have a guess know as to why she left... It is probably not right though so I won't say it, so I don't embarrass myself. Anyway please update soon!

Author's Response: James was very self involved when he was younger. He spent most of his time with Fred causing chaos and mischief.

The picture makes another appearance in chapter 4 or 5. So yes, it's foreshadowing and I'm sure you're at least a little right in your theory. I was pretty transparent about it.

Thank you for the review. As soon as I'm done editing (50% finished as of now) I'll submit it for validation!


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