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Review:Aphoride says:
Oh my gosh. So, I've read a lot of Scorose's (who hasn't?! :P) but this is really, completely different to nearly every other one I've read and gah, it's so good!

First, gosh, I love your Scorpius! He's just so conflicted and sarcastic and kinda pathetic and a little bit whiny, and he's just so real that I just wanna hug him and not stop for about two hours. The way he interacts with everyone is just so post-teenage boy it's funny - he's scared of the women at work, feels lonely and without friends, is doing a kinda crappy job because it's something to do and is still living with his parents. I almost feel like I could walk down the street one day and bump into him, you know? It's almost terrifying... but just great ;)

I feel so sorry for him, though! You've really started this with a bang - Rose breaking up with him, the issues with his parents' marriage and his family life... he's got so much on his plate that maybe it's a good thing he's only doing a bad job, lol - he might not be able to concentrate otherwise. I really, really wanna see where you're going to take this - are he and Rose going to get back together? Are his parents going to work something out/stay together (Drastoria for the win!)? Will he stop being scared of the women at work? SO MANY QUESTIONS, SO FEW ANSWERS!

There were a couple of mistakes - you misspelled 'Avada Kedavra' - and a couple of little grammar things but they didn't effect the story at all.

Great, great job! :D

Aph xx

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