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Review:teh tarik says:
Hello! I'm from the review tag :)

Wow, this is one fast-paced and entertaining read! I love the action sequences! And these were a nice contrast to the softer, warmer moments where Narcissa shows her more maternal side :) She's never been portrayed as a particularly maternal figure in the books (yes, I know she fears a lot for Draco and all, but still...) and I'm really glad you chose to really accentuate this quality about her. I enjoyed the level of detail you went into to depict the elaborate protective measures constructed by Narcissa. The boggart part had me for a while!

And I think the story had a great ending; I like that it concludes with Voldemort's downfall and the uncertainty for the Malfoys.

OK, great work, and I hope to read more of your writing soon :D

Author's Response: Thanks for reading & reviewing!

I am glad you enjoyed reading this, and the action as well as warm moments, as well as the small details I put in, and the ending.

Thanks a lot for your flattering comments!


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