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Review:Margravine says:
The reason it took me so long to review this crowning glory of chapter is that I actually needed to give it a few days to process and appreciate at it's value. You deserve no less than a real review for this baby.

Firstly: the shifting between perspective was beautiful. This really is Tanith and Toby's story equally, and I love so, so much that they are finally at a place where they not only know each other better than anyone, and are using that to heal rather than hurt each other (is any of this based on real people?!?)


also, cal pretty much sums it all up and voices what everyone was thinking. YOU CRAZY KIDS (with the real fear that this was another dark twist).

Supremely happy. This chapter makes all the angst and grief and mistakes worth it!

WHAT A TWIST RE JEN. Don't believe it. But highly interesting and devastating if true.

FAVOURITE FAN FIC OF ALL TIME. Surpasses some of the orginal novels IMO.

Thankyou Slide - you've provided so much entertainment, interest and even comfort through your work, over years now, and it's rare, and wonderful to have fictional characters and stories who can retain this level of love :)

Author's Response: I can only be flattered this chapter merited, nay, required such attention and thought! I don't mind well-considered reviews being late if they are like this! And it really is the final culmination of everything between T/T, and while originally Tobias WAS the protagonist of the series, and arguably still was as late as Shade, Tanith leapt forward come Shadow and it's very much about BOTH of them, and both their pain and their endeavours. I always say those two were a love story of two people who weren't perfect for each other YET, and the question was if they'd grow up to become those people or not. Finally, thankfully... they have. And as you say are using their intimacy to heal.

Any resemblance to real persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental! Thankfully. All sorts of Bits and Pieces are drawn from life, and people, but I assure you my life is not so messed up. And YES. FINALLY there are no secrets between them. FINALLY.

Cal totally gets to be audience voice. I pretty much had to stick a lampshade hanging on this issue to reassure that I wasn't just going to screw with you guys even more. Aaand... I can make no comment on the topic of the possibility of Jen's guilt. Certainly Harry's logic is sound, she has motive!!

Thank you for your kind words. As a story I've been working on for way, WAY too long, it's thoroughly satisfying to see everything come together in this final furlong and especially to see readers enjoying the ride along with. I'm very proud of it and can only hope to continue producing this kind of quality in my work. My humblest thanks, again!

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