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Review:Jchrissy says:
Okay. The way you completely surrounded Pansy with NEEDING to create that potion. Needing to find a way to be closer with him. It was just very, very well done. It's different than missing, but just barely. It's not as pure as missing someone you love would be, it's more obsessive than that, but it was just such a powerful chapter with her need to just feel like she's closer to him. Love it.

And her mirror is completely enabling her! She should realize that if Draco wanted to get into contact with her, if he missed her as badly as she missed him, he would find a way. And it's so sad that, even if her feelings revolve more around the desire to be Mrs. Draco Malfoy than the desire to be married to Draco, that she doesn't realize how far her mind is taking her. Then it seems like part of her might be realizing there is a chance that Draco no longer loves her, but her reflection quickly helps her remove those doubts.

One thing I love so much about this. You've matched your style so perfectly to Pansy. The things that Pansy says/does are like her, but it's more than that. Just the entire writing is Pansy and I can tell how much you now her, how much you can get into her voice.

Awesome chapter, darling! I can't believe it's been so long since I reviewed.. but... if we're being honest..I actually got too into it and read way ahead a few weeks ago *ninja eyes* but now I'm going to go back and review!! Sorry I'm naughty and read ahead, haha!

Author's Response: Hello!

I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter! I thought that the potion was a good way to work through and explain Pansy's obsessive need to be with Draco and I'm so pleased that you agree! As well, in case you're interested, the potion actually plays a (large) part later in the story. ;)

Haha- when I first read the sentence about the mirror enabling her I was put in mind of a friend urging her to buy awful clothes... And I suppose the situation is quite similar! Her reflection is definitely a bad influence on poor Pansy... Though she won't be able to be rid of her for quite some time.

:D I'm so, so, so happy that you think I've written this story in a style that suits Pansy! It's one of those things where you think it sounds like Pansy but you want outside confirmation just to make sure. Thank you so much!

Haha- that's perfectly fine! I've done exactly the same thing with a few stories... *guilty face* I do love to hear your thoughts though so even if you drop me a PM it's much appreciated! :)

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