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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
HellO!

Have I mentioned to you on the forums how much I like this story? Its becoming a slight addiction and I'm really glad that you updated for it! :D
And poor, poor Darcy! I really thought the beginning of this was pretty hilarious. How nervous do you have to be to actually have a nightmare about going on a date?! I thought that showed just how unsettled by it she really was and I'm not sure if you're going to play around with it a bit more. It was pretty interesting to me that her nightmare revolved around being in Madame Puddifoots (Shudders) with Louis. Does this mean she's fearing her reaction to being in a romantic setting with him? :3
Lucky girl.
Anyway, by the time we get to Darcy actually going into Hogsmeade (Good luck to Lys and Lucy by the way), I could practically feel her unease. And Louis, his composure is something to admire! He wasn't particularly nervous at all! :p
How annoying when Darcy was suffering! Hahaha. Anyway, I did like that they actually had a conversation with one another for a while, which brought a bit more depth to them. And Louis especially, I sort of want to know more about him and I think Darcy does too, underneath it all. But perhaps the Towel Incident isn't going to be the only thing Louis is going to hold over her head? Mwhahah. Why do I get the feeling that that trip to the Three Broomsticks isn't going to go as she hopes? Really great chapter too! I only spotted like, two grammar mistakes to my five million and the pacing was excellent! I didn't turn away for a second! ;)
Can't wait for the next update! What are you going to update for in the meantime? LMT? I've been missing that you know! Holding out on me! :D
On my end, keep praying for A Force of Wills and after that, expect the Misfits and then Roxanne again. Hopefully, it'll all go as planned. :p
Until then, see you on the forums!
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Gabbie! It's lovely to see you back, and with such a long review! Gasp! Haha.
Darcy is definitely worried about her date, especially if she's having nightmares about it! She just really doesn't like Louis, and I think he's probably the worst person in Hogwarts for her to be forced to go on a date with, just because they clash so much!
And then the big day finally arrives! You'll most definitely be hearing about Lys and Lucy later on! And Louis is totally confident in himself. That jerk! Hahaha. He seems to live just to annoy Darcy, doesn't he? Writing their conversation was really important to me, because I wanted their relationship to be more than just surfacy teasing, because they both have layers to them, and I thought that would (eventually) show in their banter. And the Towel Incident is just the beginning, trust me! I have plan for Miss Finnigan, and she isn't going to like them! I'm working on TFD and LMT, so we'll see what happens! I really don't know what I'm going to update at this point! I can't wait for more of your updates as well! Thank you so much for the review!
Cassie :)


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