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Review:M'n'M says:
Wow, I would have reviewed every chapter except that I was desperate to read the next one haha. This is so good! And I'm glad that you gave the back story instead of dragging it out over the ENTIRE story. I hate it when everyone can deduce what has happened and yet the author still tries to make it all a big mystery.

I really like all of it. I like all of the characters and I like her friends although I feel like I would like to get to know them better. Like, instead of just the basics I want to know their flaws too and weird quirks. Just to make them seem more real if that makes sense. I know the stories still in the introduction stage but just something to keep in mind.

I really like Al. He seems like a cool guy but he's also pretty loyal to James which I like. There are so many stories where they hate each other so I like reading stories where the author changes it up and gives them a little Bromance.

The only thing that has kinda been bugging me is that you keep referring to their relationship as their "first true love" but isn't the point of a true love that there's only one? I mean, everyone (or at least most people) have their first love and then a bunch of other bf's/gf's but isn't true love supposed to be only one person? IDK maybe I'm just a romantic but it was kinda bugging me.

Aside from that I really love this story and I totally understand if you disagree with my comments I just thought I would put it out there. But this story is great and I can't wait for the next update!

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