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Review:MargaretLane says:
Yay, another new chapter. I was getting impatient. And it looks like this is going to focus on teachers and classes. I was looking forward to finding out what new teachers you've included.

I'm expecting Professor Dire to live up to his/her name. *grins* *goes to find out*

Oh, *dies laughing* There's something in that letter that is VERY similar to something Harry is going to write to Albus towards the end of my story. I recently figured out how Albus and Rose are going to solve my mystery and the Invisibility Cloak will be involved.

*grins at Harry knowing everything*

Yeah, asking Peeves for help isn't going to work too well. Love the black ink squirt gun! So typical of him. Last night was the Late Late Toy Show and the presenter kept spraying kids with icing sugar things and shooting toy guns into the audience (honestly, he got more carried away than the kids), so this is reminding me of that. I think black ink would be worse to have sprayed at you though!

You've said "their had always been a little bit of light", when it should have been "there was always"

Rose's notes could yet come in interesting. With evil wizards plotting in the first chapter and some of those plants she's made notes on pretty dangerous, I can see them having to face one of them later on.

*laughs at "no, they're racoon hide"*

You should have had a comma, rather than a full stop after "Blimey", when David mutters it.

Hmm, Dire is a bit suspicious, but I doubt he's going to be guilty. I'd say he's going to be like Snape. We'll be supposed to think it's him, but it'll really be somebody else. Since most of your teachers are OCs, there is a huge list of suspects. Hmm.

I got the impression from the first chapter that the two wizards were men, but of course, IF there is a teacher who's up to something dodgy, they might just be helping those two or working for them, so I can't completely rule Selwyn out.

Great chapter. Am looking forward to seeing more of the teachers.

Author's Response: I'm sorry it was a bit late, I submitted it on Sunday but it didn't get validated for a while.

Yeah, there is a reason Professor Dire is named that! I made him like my sixth grade math teacher. Every time somebody got a question wrong, she pierced them with a horribly awful stare. My friend and I nicknamed it her "Death Stare." Luckily, she didn't hate me that much, but every once in a while I would get pierced with her death stare...

Squirting kids with ink is definitely something Peeves would do. He probably stole an inkwell from a student.

Thanks for pointing out my mistakes. I will fix them. :)

Yeah, David is a very sarcastic character, isn't he?

I'm not going to mention anything about your suspicions except this:

1. The people in the first chapter are definitely men.

2. Th identity of the young man isn't very interesting. He's never directly mentioned in the Harry Potter series. The identify of the old man, however, is extremely interesting.

Keep reading!



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