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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
Hi, Voldy Needs a Hug here with your requested review. Sorry it took me so long to get around to reviewing! Anyway, here it is.

This chapter was amazing - I don't think there are any other words to describe it, to be honest. I really enjoyed the originality of the fanfiction. I haven't read anything quite like this before, and I rather enjoyed it.

I loved how you selected to write from George's point of view, especially his emotions immediately after Fred's death. His thoughts and emotions seemed spot on throughout the entire chapter. It would be nice to see some of George's thoughts toward the end of the chapter when he's clinging to his twin's lifeless body.

I thought it was interesting that you inserted his thoughts into parenthesis (I assume). I typically see them in italics, but that is just author preference.

Excellent job!

Author's Response: Aww..thank you so much for your wonderful review, Voldy! :D Your words mean a lot to me, and I'm glad you think my depiction of George's POV is convincing :) And original? Wow, this is some seriously amazing praise! The parentheses weren't so much deliberate thoughts but...well, moments of umm...consciousness (for lack of a better word). Or echoes, or asides, or strange, rather irrelevant observations.

Thanks for taking the time to read and review this! It really does mean a lot to me :D and I'm so glad you liked it!

-teh



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