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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
I loved it, as always! I think what sets this chapter apart for me is the different povs! I love seeing things from Snapes pov, I think that it really helps the story along, and now I really love how you have Sirius! Really, is there a character you can't do? I think you might have already guessed, but I believe that your characterization is spot on and wonderful. Not only from the ones you tell the pov from but also the supporting characters, Lily and Dumbledore were perfect!

This chapter really does move the story along and add to the actual plot which i'm super excited for! I can't wait until they find out about the actual order! I'm so excited to see whats going to happen in the next chapter!

Honestly, this chapter has me just flailing! Even though there isn't any action between snape and beth its just got me on this high of your story.. maybe it was the perfect Dumbledore at the end.. whatever it was it just completely worked for me!

I'm not sure what else I can really say about this chapter besides that I loved it, which I think I might have already said, but I do! It all flows so well, and the characterization was just amazing, and the plot is starting to really come through into the story, and I just don't know what else to say! Great Job!


Author's Response: Erica! How lovely to see you back by this story! :) This was the first story I ever wrote (even though it was only my second novel) to switch points of view, and now I can't imagine writing without that little tool. You get a much broader view of the plot that way, I find, and sometimes it helps when you feel like you're in a rut to just switch up the point of view you're writing from. I'm so glad you found my characterization to be on point, too!

Most, if not all, of this story's interaction between Snape and Beth is going to be things sort of like what happened in this chapter, so it's a good thing you enjoyed it so much! :3 It makes me so, so happy that you're still reading this story, Erica, and I'm beyond pleased that you like it, too. ♥

Thank you so much for taking the time to leave this review for me, and I hope to see you back quite soon, too!

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