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Review:hedwigs_theme says:
Hey its me again!

I'm really glad you wrote this because it gives people a deeper insight into what bullying really is about. Even though this is just a fictional story, the themes still happen to thousands of people in real life.

You have done a great job of writing this along with the addition of humor (like the pig animagus thing) so funny!

I love your characterisation, it's so unique and really brings out a side in these characters that is not written much in fanfiction. I love how you made Dom so caring and sweet and Fred so outhere and weird! I also love love love to see James' nicer side. Rather than seeing him arrogant and stuck up he is humble and caring. I love how you have done this because it gives a reader a fresh perspective on him.

I also like you got rid of the stereotype of Hufflepuffs being kind and loyal. The bully girls definitely do not show these attributes which is also great because you haven't just stuck to the "guidelines" making the characters seem less Mary Sue.

So, if you couldn't tell from this review, I LOVED your second chapter and will be starting the last one as soon as I can! (I know I said that last time and it took me ages but i will try)!

10/10 keep up the amazing writing :)

Author's Response: Hi again! Sorry about the lateness of this response!

Bullying happens to most people but sometimes people still don't really get what it's really about. That is the point of this story, and I'm glad to hear that the message is getting through! :D

I'm so glad you like my characterisation, I tried making them as un-cliche as possible. :p James is an odd character, he used to be stuck up but with a few words he becomes humble and caring, and that's kind of what Harry was like. In OOtP, he was angsty and grumpy but with a few words he usually went back to normal. :p

I also love James Potter II, so anything he does in my eyes is perfect! :p

Just because someone is in a specific house, doesn't mean they fit the stereotype! I also wanted to break that little convention we usually see in fanfictions! :p I'm SO glad to hear that they aren't 'Mary Sue', because I know how much it frustrates me when there's Mary Sue's in a story! :p

I'm so glad you liked it, don't worry about how long it took you, there's absolutely no rush! I completely understand that RL tends to but it's head in our fanfiction lives! :p

Thank you for taking the time to review this, it's really appreciated! ♥


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