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Review:seekers_destiny says:
You've changed things from canon a bit. It looks like Remus and Tonks won't get the chance to die in the battle. The fact that it is the full moon will make Greyback and any Werewolves that he brings with him all the more dangerous. I wasn't expecting the battle quite yet, you surprised me and now I know why you said this story is nearing the end. It's been a fun ride and it's not done yet.

I would have thought the best part was the whole 'Is Teddy affected?' thing but you topped it with Izzy's actions at the end. She is her father's daughter.

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all except from the portable bassinet.
all except for the portable bassinet.

this little guy has me running more raged than all of those things
this little guy has me running more ragged than all of those things

what did I hear about a blanker fort
what did I hear about a blanket fort

over the nearly-off-age daughter
over the nearly-of-age daughter

or by physically trying her to the furniture
or by physically tying her to the furniture

as silently as humanely possible
as silently as humanly possible

Author's Response: Actually, it won't be the full moon during the battle - The full moon happens when Teddy is three weeks old. Since he was born in 3 April (see last chapter), Tonks would've come to the Blacks at around the 25th of April. The second part of the chapter, however, as the date stated in bold stated, took place in 2 May. I was a bit afraid people would miss the different dates in the chapter, thus my initial A/N. The second half, Tonks is back home with Remus and Izzy is no longer looking after her siblings. But, well, this means no full moon for Greyback during the battle and no safety for Remus or Tonks during it either. They can still very well die...
Glad you liked it anyway - the final battle looms in the horizon. But don't worry about an end. The sequel will follow, though that one will shift the focus to Izzy and George a bit more...
Anne


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