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Review:Ardeith says:
Probably the best chapter so far. :-)

So suspenseful! I was holding my breath again. I continue to love how you keep Draco in character.

I was also impressed how you described Polyjuice from the inside. It must indeed be weird to see someone else's hands and to have someone else's voice coming out of your body.

And oh, Hermione is strong! I think seeing poor, dead Harry would have caused me to give up.

I loved Charlie to the rescue! However did he manage to keep his wand? I see some of your reviewers think he may survive, which I admit never occurred to me. :-( Hope they're right...

Author's Response: Yay -- that's awesome to hear! :D I remember that from about chapter eleven on, this story came very fast in the physical writing of it. And that somehow makes for faster reading, I think, though I'm not sure why.

I'm so pleased to hear you're continuing to think Draco is in character. And I've always wondered what Polyjuice must feel like from the inside! That's a personal conjecture, I suppose, but that's how it worked its way in there. ;)

Some people did indeed think Charlie survived, but you'll know for sure in the next chapter. Maybe they're right -- you never know... Thank you so much for this review, Ardeith!

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