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Review:Ardeith says:
Oh dear.oh Sirius! I'll give him a hug (and it looks like I'm the first...though probably not the last)! If it will help him go back to bouncy!Sirius like at the start of the chapter and like he used to be.

I love that we know what will inevitably happen but I don't know how you will get there. Will Dumbledore reach out to Sev? Can't wait to see how you handle the whole secret keeper thing. Though on the other hand I hate to think about what lies in store for James and Lily. Yet another tribute to you, I never cared for Marauders stories and never got all sentimental about James and Lily till I "met" yours.

Author's Response: Sirius really does need your hug! Oh, dear... I'm so proud of him for being so loyal, for caring for Beth like he does, but he totally went about it in the right way here, and I know that, even if he doesn't. I just mentioned this in a response to Sarah, too, but he's so /different/ here from how he used to be, and it makes me so sad. It's so strange how the writing of him changed IMMEDIATELY when I set out to write this book.

You're definitely going to see the repercussions of that letter, though, in the next chapter and the ones to come. I really can't wait for you to read them! I'm very excited to get the rest of this story up and posted. :D

So, so glad you're still reading this story and enjoying it! ♥ It's people like you who keep me writing at all. Thank you!!

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