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Review:hannnahgracr says:
Again another really good chapter but just one small thing I'd like to say.

This sentence is just a bit clumpy if you know what I mean - 'watched as I spoke with her about her becoming a witch and then watched as she got so very upset since she thought that I was insulting her and her and her sister wandered back to their house quickly.' I think you could have made it flow a bit better. I find that with a few other parts of the story, you use quite a lot of short sentences.

Apart from that I really enjoyed it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your feedback! I'll take a look at the sentence and play around with it. :)

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