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Review:ValWitch21 says:
Oh, this was lovely. I loved the way you portrayed Neville and the way he pushes his teacher role away for a moment to become the almost-parent.

Rose is great too, and the way you repeat the same scene in different circumstances is really good.

I also like your description of Neville's job, with students wrestling plants and him in the middle of the hub trying to keep everyone alive!

Only thing I'd have to say is your punctuation that seems slightly off to me sometimes, but that wasn't a problem and this story was a nice one to read :)

I'm also going to return your advice and suggest getting a banner for this, to attract people more?

Oh and congratulations for being Runner Up on the challenge, of course!


Author's Response: I actually already have a banner :) So your advice was followed, even before it was given :D Thank you so much :) It was actually my first challenge entry, so it was exciting to write :) Thank you for reviewing :D

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