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Review:CambAngst says:
Very interesting premise! You don't often think of magical folk getting caught up in the major news events of the muggle world. Since you're about to plunge the two of them into the middle of one, I can only assume this story will be about that voyage.

You give us only the barest taste of who these characters are and what to expect in your prologue, but I still found it intriguing. The son of an old, pureblood family and his adopted brother/best friend, setting off on a great adventure together. It definitely holds a lot of promise.

I noticed one small typo you might want to take a second look at:

-- Jared didn't answer me, he'd already fallen asleep. I listened to his soft breathing, waiting for sleep to tale me as well, and my dreams are all of our adventures on Titanic. - should be "take me as well".

Nice start!

Author's Response: Yeah, it'll be interesting writing about the friends on the Titanic. New for me to write, but I hope I get it right and people continue to enjoy it.

Thanks for pointing it out, I've fixed it now. And thank you for leaving such an amazing review. :D

Sam.


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