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Review:manno_malfoy says:
Hey there! I truly want to hide behind a boulder from shame for how long I've taken to get here. But honestly, Nano had taken over my life. So I'm really, really sorry!

First of all, I'd like to tell you that I'm not in the category of readers that you have specified and felt that I could relate to your characters and your events well enough. Like, I didn't feel as though much (or anything) was lost in translation, and I could understand why your characters were behaving the way they were.

You also seem to have constructed the characters very well. You've given your main character a distinctive voice; I could tell that she's trying her best to accept how underachieved she is when compared to her best friend, and she's trying to take the matter as lightheartedly as possible. I wonder how long she'd be able to keep that attitude up though. I also really admire the friendship you've got between the three characters we've seen so far.

I think the flow was great and there were hardly any technical mistakes that disrupted the sentences and so on, so that was well done. You've used this chapter really well to give us an insight about how your central characters take on life, which I think sets up the story's theme really well.

I've actually enjoyed this first chapter and I'm eager for the events to start popping up. I'm also excited about Oliver because, well, what's not to be excited about? I'd like to see how you're going to tie him into the world of the characters you've introduced so far and to see what he's going to be like in this story!

I apologise again for the massive delay and feel free to re-request whenever you like. :D

-Manno

Author's Response: Hello, hello! No need to apologize all. I am also a bit behind on my review thread due to NaNo, so no worries. :)

Thank you so much! I was really concerned about people not being interested in this age group; I suppose I was just weird when I was younger because anything that involved people over the age of 25 was completely lost on me XD

I agree completely--how can you NOT be excited about the prospect of Oliver Wood? :)

Thank you again so very much!


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