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Review:Potterwatch124 says:
This story is really adorable :) I have to say, this is an evil cliffhanger. One thing that confused me a bit was how quickly Aspen recovered from 3 years of being in the hospital. It really drains your strength and it's difficult to function, let alone play Quidditch like a pro, and after 3 years, that she could straight back into friendships right where she left them and know about everything surprised me a bit. It seemed a little unrealistic, like how quickly she recovers after the coma and how easily she recovers her memory and goes back to regular life. Maybe consider giving her more time to recover? Also, some of the threads (like Michelle in Chapter 1, who I was curious about) don't really continue, but I guess as an author you have to pick and choose (I know I accidentally drop threads sometimes) :) Anyway, it's a really good story, and I can't wait for chapter 19!

Author's Response: First of all thanks so much, and about the threads, some I accidentally drop, some I choose to drop and some will appear later, even though they haven't appeared in a while. Wink, wink. With recovering, I thought I mentioned this in the story, but I may not of so I'll mention it soon, Aspen started being cancer free in February of everyone else's sixth year. So she had almost eight months to recover. I will defiantly consider giving her more of a recovery time, if she does survive. Thanks again!
-Claire


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