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Review:spreaddapoo93 says:
Hello! I made a guarantee quite a while back after reading yor oneshot contribution to Shedding Our Skins, very much eager to read the rest of the story! This is a bit later than I would have liked but here I am!

This opening chapter is superbly written; you really have a fine touch with depicting children (Greg) and the relationship between adults/adolescents and children - few ever get it right, so props to you!

It was also wonderful seeing how you embodied the letter-enrolment tradition so very well - it's the first time I've read an HPFF with a Hogwarts acceptance letter and it was so well achieved - I was entirely sold by it! :D

Anyways, I thoroughly enjoyed it! I really am intrigued and if the title and summary is anything to go by, things aren't going to stay as adorable and innocent as Gregory ;)

Author's Response: Thanks very much for dropping by :-)

This opening chapter was rewritten several times, notably after I finished about Chapter 7, and I'm pretty happy with the way it stands now. It's part of my job to get adult/children interactions right so I hope I'm good at gauging things!

And yes, you're right. Innocence gets about as far as Chapter Four.

Sheriff


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