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Review:adluvshp says:
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Aw this was such a short but heartbreaking piece. I liked the way you narrated this as sort of a internal monologue.

The ending left me wanting more - it felt like it ended too soon. You have describe Snape's feelings quite well in just a few words. The emotion really came across.

I would have liked to see better use of vocabulary though, since I always like heavy words in such fics, but that's just me.

You were quite good. I liked this.

good work!

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: AD! Oh how I have missed getting reviews from you! Thank you so much for this wonderful review! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this short oneshot about Snape! It was meant to be a very heartbreaking and short piece as its for the every word counts challenge. Thank you again for taking the time to read and review!

~Slytherinchica08~


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