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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Hey it's Courtney, here for the review tag.
First off, I have to say that your use of imagery is spectacular. I have serious problems with image, and could never achieve something as awesome as this piece of writing. Even from the very beginning sentence; 'The ancient house was dark, except for the slender fingers of morning sunlight' you could tell that you have put a lot of thought into this first chapter.
The one thing I did notice, however, is that many of your sentences seem a bit...long? This could just be me though, I'm not used to writing/reading this style!
I love your characterization of Regulus and Sirus-most especially Sirius. He just seemed the very definition of a moody teenage boy!
Overall, I think you've done a great job with this first chapter, and I expect the rest of 'Post Scriptum' is just as fantastic!
Courtney:)

Author's Response: Hello, thanks for coming by!

Well, everybody starts somewhere, right? I used to feel the same way about other authors, and so I made working on imagery a serious goal. I think you could probably work on it with practice. There are also probably some good tutorials for it on the forums :)

Yeah, my sentences are a little long. Something else I'm working on :D

I'm glad you like Regulus and Sirius, though! They're very young, and Sirius is especially moody. I hope you find him entertaining.

Thanks so much for this very kind review! I hope to see you pop by again sometime soon.

Amanda


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