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Review:Voldy Needs a Hug says:
Wow. That was a really powerful introductory chapter. Firstly, I loved the beginning of the chapter. It was exceptionally well-written and contained quite an extensive vocabulary. It indirectly revealed quite a bit of information about the main character's early childhood, while captivating a reader's attention.

The plot was excellent. The events were not rushed, but explained in their entirety. The plot still moved along quickly, though, which definitely held my attention throughout the entire chapter. Additionally, the events flowed flawlessly from one to the next. Your transitions were perfect.

Your characterisation was spectacular. While you revealed a great deal of information about the narrator, you still left some aspects of her life a mystery. Also, her father really started to get on my nerves. How could he just ignore his daughter like that? I felt so bad for her!

Lastly, your ending was outstanding. And very powerful. And an excellent cliff hanger. Now I am unable to prevent myself from clicking Submit for my review and reading the next chapter before I self-combust from the suspense.

Fantastic job! Keep up the great writing!

10/10

Author's Response: Hahahahah thanks so much!
Glad you liked it :)
Thanks for the review :) !!

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