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Review:Courtney Dark says:
Tag! (mwahahahaha)
Okay, sorry.
I really enjoyed this first chapter. I've never read a Tonks fanfiction before, let alone a Tonks/Charlie one, so this was new and interesting for me.
I think you did I really good job with Tonk's characterization. In the HP books she was always one of my favourite characters, what with her clumsiness and all, and you still managed to hold onto these traits of hers while making her into your own character-a character that was a lot deeper and very realistic.
That's another thing I liked about this chapter-the realism. Even most of us aren't Aurors or dragon keepers (unfortunately) I could picture Tonks and Charlie as a normal couple in a very normal world. So...great job!
I always try to think of criticism in my reviews, but I honestly can only think positive.
Overall, I think this is a really goos chapter. Congrats!

Author's Response: Yay!
Hi darling! I was really nervous about writing Tonks, because I didn't actually care for JKR's portrayal of her. But I think (hope) I found a good balance between the one in the books i wasn't crazy about, and then a Tonks who I really could love!

I wanted to bring a lot of realistic feelings into this, so I'm really happy you feel like they're just another normal couple!

Thank you so much for stopping by to review m'dear, and I'm so happy you enjoyed this! Sorry for taking ages to respond!!


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