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Review:Shindig says:
Haha James' cupcakes are cooked now so he can run out screaming he needs to eat them! Haha I only just got that.
And Blergh. I should have known you were going to put the stupid code in. Here I was, thinking in the second or third chapter Avery and James would get locked in a broom cupboard (or just a cupboard, whatever) and 'accidentally' start snogging and it would be all fluffy and then there would be JAVERY!
But no.
You had to go and rip my heart out with the code.
Do you know how long I've been shipping Javery?
Do you?
I don't. At least since that Italy Chappie in BTQC came out.
So, anyway, it was a great chapter (other than the soul crushing code). I really liked how you showed how James' relationship with his father is on the mend, and how generous and thoughtful it was that Harry organised the party. Though what's up with Al and Paloma? Al didn't seem too bothered about it, in all honesty. Ginny is awesome. So is Grandma Weasley. The Avery seduction scene was hysterical. I loved James' inner monologue comments about the Code, they were really funny. I wonder which ones Artemis broke? James' soreness after was hilarious, especially when Henrik tells him about the meeting after.
But yeah, great chapter! So excited for the next ones!
See ya,
Shindig :D

Author's Response: Hehe throwback!

You really think I would make the sequel to BTQC fluffy? Nope. That's what 30 Days is for. Go get your fix over there ;) This is all humor, drama, and some romance. NO BROOM CUPBOARDS IN THE FLAT. only joking, there will be plenty of moments. BUT THERE IS ALSO A CODE.

You'll be fine.

I love watching James realize this is not like Gryffindor. It's not a few practices a week and then class and three games a year. It suddenly went from a hobby to a career. It's really fun watching him respond to that.

Thanks for the review!


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