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Review:Courtney Dark says:
I really liked this chapter. I especially liked the development of Dean and Seamus, because there hadn't been much said about them in previous chapters. I loved the idea of Seamus's guy crush on Oliver Wood, it really made me laugh.
I have to admit, I was completely confused when I read that bit about Krum actually being Oliver. I was all WHAAAT!!! and had to go back and read it over but once I had, it made perfect sense.
I felt like this chapter was a bit short, though this isn't really a bad thing. in fact, it's quite good! I don't like it when chapters drag on for so long that you get bored of them.
Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Yesss!! That's so very exciting! I really wanted it to be a surprise plot twist, but I didn't know if I did a decent job with it. I don't suppose I'll fool everyone but I tried. XD

I actually cut out a huge chunk of this chapter because I didn't want it to get dull towards the end. The next scene is her writing the article, and I thought it would be better to end it on a scene with more action before the reader got totally bored XD So it's definitely shorter than the other chapters, by comparison.

Thanks so much for stopping by with another lovely review! I absolutely love hearing back from you guys.

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