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Review:MargaretLane says:
Love the way you show that he's tall.

Hmm, I'm mildly intrigued by the character who mentioned "Mam" and whether they are Irish. I know we're not the only ones to use that and the nasally voice doesn't sound typically Irish, but I'm intrigued nonetheless. Will be interesting to find out who these people are.

Hmm, since we immediately meet the Head of Hufflepuff, I'm wondering if you're going to put Louis there. My first assumption was Gryffindor since that's the default for Weasleys. *laughs* But now, I'm not so sure. I could see your Louis anywhere but Slytherin really and I guess we haven't seen enough of him to rule even that out.

He's a lot younger than his siblings.

Hufflepuff for a Malfoy. Interesting. I'm not sure I've ever seen a Malfoy in that house before. All the others, yes, but not Hufflepuff. Wonder what Draco will think.

*laughs* Slytherin? The one house I didn't expect. Hmm, I was really expecting Hufflepuff after one of the twins was placed there. I kind of thought they'd be important to this and that he'd befriend one of them (or both), so I was expecting him to be in the same house and most likely the one placed in Hufflepuff, because that seemed more intriguing than Ravenclaw. Ravenclaw strikes me as being the house the Malfoys would like next best after Slytherin, as intelligence often leads to success.

Hmm, a part-giant (possibly) as head of Slytherin. Interesting.

Author's Response: Hey again (:.

Yep. I see Bill as tall, and since Fleur was described as tall, I figured it was only fitting. I can see him going through the same spurts that Ron did.

No, she's not Irish. Just a random character, really, but I hadn't decided on anything aside from her nasally voice. I do know she's not Irish though, because the thought never crossed my mind, haha.

Oh yes; he's definitely much younger. I don't know why, but I saw Bill and Fleur having big gaps between kids. Opposite of all the Weasleys, who seem to like having kids back to back. Someone had to be different, methinks.

In my initial writings, she was a Gryffindor. But then I had another think on it, and after having a conversation with the hat, it decided on Hufflepuff and Slytherin. It may have been wrong in it's placement. Only time will tell!

Hahaha. I know. It was either Ravenclaw or Slytherin in my head. He's not brave or rash enough for Gryffindor. He's impartial enough for Hufflepuff, but I don't think it's the right house for him. I think by the end, you'll see that the hat made the right choice. Not all Slytherins are sly and cunning, and he'll fit right into that minority.

As for being friends with one of the twins? Oh, he will be. You were right in thinking they were important to the story. I figured that with Louis, who won't make many friends inside his own house, befriending those in another would be the option.

Possibly. Though, considering the house's prejudice in the past, it doesn't seem very likely, yes? xD

Thanks for reviewing!

~Leigh

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