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Review:Randomgirl says:
This was an amazing story, it had a bit of everything, a little romance, a little mystery but a lot of sadness. As wonderful as it was, it was terribly upsetting! I felt so deeply for Marta, she was doomed from the start :( but all good stories evoke strong emotion and just because this one was sadness it doesn't take away from the fact that this was a beautifully written piece, that was a captivating read. Well done ur a wonderful author as I have said before and you never fail to keep me guessing :D one of the most shocking/ traumatising parts was that the baby was Sirius'. It was so sad on so many levels!! The baby will be an orphan, Sirius will never know his child, Remus lost the love of his life due to actions of one of his best friends, who didn't even know what he did!!! Wow, such a dramatic ending on so many levels! And now off to the sequel :)
Random girl :)xx

Author's Response: I'd known since the beginning that this would be a sad story, but I didn't decide it would be this sad until I was half way through writing it. I'm glad to hear that despite the depressing ending, you still appreciate it for being a good story. Originally, Benjamin didn't win, but when I changed my mind, I figured that making Sirius involved in this way would be a sucker punch to Remus (and you). And while Marta's story is done, I'm pleased to hear you're going to jump over to the sequel! I hope you enjoy and thank you so much for your wonderful reviews! (And I'm sorry it took me nearly two weeks to respond!)

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