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Review:adluvshp says:
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This was another well-written story of yours, good job :) I liked how you wrote Moody, and incorporated the whole Constant vigilance thing in it. The backstory about his father being in war and such was thoughtful indeed. The best part I liked in this was the ending, how Moody was envisioning the near future, and how he died smiling. It was so sad yet touching, and it made me smile a sad smile too. I think you captured him brilliantly over all, and the narrative was well done. All in all, I loved it. Another great piece of writing :)

10/10

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hey AD! Thanks for tagging me!

I'm glad you liked getting a glimpse of Moody's background and seeing where the roots of "Constant Vigilance!" came from. It's great that you liked the ending, too. I figured Moody would be precisely the kind of guy who would literally smile at death as it came to take him. I'm happy that you felt like characterization was in line and liked the writing style, too. Thanks for your kind review!

Amanda


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