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Review:CassiePotter says:
Gabbie, this chapter was awesome! You write Hagrid so well!!! It was really enjoyable to read!
I loved how different all the kids' personalities are, and how they clash a little bit. It makes things interesting, especially because Scorpious is so moody! Haha. And I am SO EXCITED for the chapter when they see Benjamin. Sorry... I just had a fangirl moment. Heehee. But his letter was really fun to read, because it's so Ben but it's different than how we normally see him because he's talking to his brother and not Roxanne. I can't wait to find out what happens next and who's killing the death eater kids! I hope they find out and stop whatever it is! ASOS is in the works right one, but it should be up soon! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

I would have answered this yesterday for you but the wifi at the library was being a major jerk and cut off on me! I got my laptop fixed, have I mentioned that? I'm so happy! :D
Anyway, I took my time to write Hagrid. I wasn't sure if I would portray him well at all and I was worried that I hadn't done a good job. His speech patterns are really hard to grasp! D':
Oh, the kids. I tried to make them all a little different and I might try to in the future as well since Sue and Rose are starting to merge into one person. Ick! Hahahaha.
They will clash but they're the sort of people that will be thrown together more and more often until they explode. Hahahaha.
Scorpy...my moody little guy. Things won't be looking up for him I'm afraid. ;)
You fangirled?! Hahaha. YES! Currently in Abandon, Ben isn't the most likeable person and one of my other reviewers was like, "I hope Roxie shows him!" hahahhaah.
Anyway, his letter was pretty fun for me to write, it has everything about his personality in it that you need to uhm, worry about. The way he talks to Scorpy is alot different from Roxanne of course and he's sort of a bully too. To both of them. Hahahah.
He'll be showing up soon, in I think the next chapter or something? I'm not sure. I have to look at my chicken scratch notes! :p
Anyway, the kids will slowly begin to realize that the Death Eater kid murders are not as they seem. I hope the truth surprises you! And thanks for coming back!!! Can't wait for ASOS! :D
Much love,
Gabbie


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