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Review:ValWitch21 says:
This was a lovely chapter -- yes, yes, despite Angelina rejecting George.

I love the way you write, it's so beautiful. This was my favourite part:

Angelina freed a small, Snitch-sized chunk of glass from its makeshift wrappings and couldn't help but gasp. Its surface was smooth and glossy, but it had a depth that seemed to continue on far beyond the limits of its size. Colours and textures moved and shifted within it creating a new palette in rhythm with her breath.

You are so amazingly talented, I don't know what to say. Wow. Just wow.

I'll be around.

10/10 :)

Author's Response: Hey again! The thing with having procrastinated the last chapters review responses is that now you get two responses from me on the same day! Thank you so much for your compliments -- I think I may be blushing. That passage, now that I'm rereading it, is a bit odd for the tone and style of this story and is much more like something I'd expect to write in my Luna-centric novella, First Star to the Right. Regardless, I'm very glad you enjoyed this chapter and thank you for taking the time to leave a review.

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