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Review:Phoenix_feather123 says:
Wow, I have to say that this was... interesting. I am now stuck wondering what just happened to charlie and who is Victoria, so yeah, that will take a while to get out of my head.

Any way, I thought this was pretty good, you could of added more detail, but then again, this is only the first chapter, and I have to say that it is waay better than my first chapter in my novel.

I am guessing this is next gen, so yay ! We are both writing next gen, except for the fact the mine is based on Albus Potter's first year.

I should stop my blabbering.

Over all, I thought this was a good atempt and you have a nice cliff hanger at the end there.

Author's Response: Thanks for the tag :)
I'm glad you are wondering about Charlie and Victoria-the cliffhanger was for that exact purpose!
And I might have to check out your stories sometime! Next generation is my favourite.

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