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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Auggghh! This is awesome!!

You write with a clever voice and a clear sense of direction. I like that about this chapter. Normally in the fanfiction I've seen, stories with summaries like yours (which drew me in to read it!) usually start off with long, drawn-out introductions. But this proved my suspicions wrong!

I already like Eryin;she seems to be a girl who is crazy without being stupidly insane, if you know what I mean. The whole list aspect intrigues me. It's pretty different, and I anxiously await the next list.

All in all, smashing beginning!

Author's Response: Thank you! I can't promise there won't be any long, drawn-out introductions to any chapters, but I prefer to start a story with a bang, rather than a sigh. Eryin's pretty fun - she'll probably get a bit crazier before the end, but I like my characters to be intelligent, too. Keep reading, I hope you continue to enjoy it! - omni.

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