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Review:zipzin says:
It's a bit short if I say so myself but the whole way you have formated your chapters has done that in the story. You mention that you are hopefully going to write a trilogy with this and I suggest in the future you combine some of the chapters into a single chapter. Just a suggestion and keep writing, I can't wait to see the end of this.

Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion; I'll keep that in mind. I am making this into a trilogy (I'm actually working on the second one now). I hope you enjoy how this ends :D

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