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Review:Pretense Of Perfection says:
This first chapter holds promise, although I must say it's a little short. Keep an eye on your tenses as well, I especially noticed in the first few paragraphs while you're introducing the main character's friends that the tenses were switched, even in the same sentence. Not too bad overall thought!!

Author's Response: Thank you!
I try to work on that and I think I might go back after i have most of story done and rewrite.
thanks for reviewing

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