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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

I'm back! Didn't I say that I would be back? I decided that I would follow up on your story since I'll be having more time lately and I'm so glad that I'm back! For a minute, I was a bit worried about Pansy but I was pleasantly relieved when Mr. Craddle took her side of things instead of Cyrils and I sort of did a happy dance. While I'm sure he's entitled to his opinion, I don't think it was right of him to put it all on Pansy's shoulders. It wasn't fair at all! The prat. But anyway, I'm more than pleased that the others were ready to welcome Pansy into theri friendship after the incident. The fact that she's smiling more on her own shows a bit more growth with her character and its nice to see her moving forward. The only thing I suppose is the fact that she's lonely and that she doesn't feel like she can do anything about it. Her relationship with her mother is failing and even her adorable pug isn't easing the ache for companionship! But, that ending was really something unexpected. Firstly, because I can't see Pansy inside of a pub and secondly because she didn't hesitate and I think that her loneliness was more than evident in that one action. What will happen I wonder? I'll have to find out because this just gets more incredible by the minute and I really do enjoy how you have your characters. They're very well thought out and seem to dominate every page, which is pretty hard to do so applause! :D Hahaha. I'll be back for sure so look forward to it! Right?!
Hahah.
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Yes, you did say that you'd be back and here you are! I'm happy that you're back as well- I always enjoy reading your reviews!

Hehe- yes, there was a danger that Mr Craddle would side with Cyril instead, wasn't there? And then what would have happened to poor Pansy? But he went with the right side instead and things worked out for Pansy.

Yes, Pansy is moving foward, slowly but surely. I'm glad that it's coming across and that you're enjoying it. :)

Hopefully the idea of Pansy inside a pub will become more believable in the next chapter when she actually is in one.

I have such a big smile on my face at the moment- I'm so happy that you're enjoying my characters! Hopefully they continue to be pleasing. And I definitely am looking forward to your next review!


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