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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
A really cute start to the story! I can't wait for your next chapter!

I loved the beginning and the way they all met. Lucy is quite hilarious!! I hope we'll see more of her later.
They're all really solid and amazing characters. :)

However, there was one thing that I would have liked to see in it.
Ivy's characterization is great, as is Albus's, but I wish that you could have shown the events more, rather than telling about them. I think another flashback into sixth year would have been nice, but maybe that's for the next chapter...? If it is, forgive me! :)

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, which distracted me from what I was supposed to be doing (preparing for scholarship interviews... whoops!). Please update soon so that I may be distracted once again!!

Author's Response: The flashback to sixth year is for the next many chapters! It's going to make up the whole of this story. It'll be in the present, too.

Hey, I hope you got those scholarship interviews done, sorry for the distraction (: And if the interviews have been had, I hope you got it!

I have another story being updated at the moment, but after that, chapter two will be up!

Thanks for the review xx

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