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Review:peanuts11 says:
Aaah, I've got to admit something. Before you asked me to review this, I read it and shamefully, did not review.
I really like this story. I really like the dual narrative as it makes me feel slightly guilty disliking Tori because I know she's missing.
I love the characterization of Charlie, who is very awkward but also very lovable.
I also really like James in Charlie's chapters, he seems really humbled by whatever went on between him, Tori and Albus. Otherwise, I think James in Tori's POV may be a bit cliche. However, I understand that because it's Tori's POV she has a rather subjective point of view so it makes sense.

I literally can't fault this story, can't wait for an update :D

Author's Response: Haha...well, thanks so much for reading. I'm really glad you like this story. Tori does come across as a little unlikeable but as you've mentioned, the duel narrative kind of makes up for this.
Charlie is one of my favourite characters-she reminds me of me in many ways.
Hmm...James too cliche in Tori's chapters? I can sort of see what you mean actually, and even though that is Tori's POV, I'll try to work on that in future stories.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, updating soon:)

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