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Review:caoty says:
Hello, I'm sorry this review is late - something IRL came up. :s

So, erm, I will admit I've been avoiding these Teddy-Dom-Victoire love triangles, because I tend to assume they're full of cliches. You know how it is, right? *sigh*

But anyway. This one-shot was a very entertaining piece, and you've shown the moral contradictions of your characters really well. It doesn't glorify cheating - Teddy is clearly not a good guy here, and Dom clearly needs to sort out her priorities too. Even Victoire, who's the most innocent of these three parties, is a difficult person to live with. It's really cool how you've written them like that.

I will say I'm not convinced that Teddy is in love with Victoire at all here, but maybe that's what you were actually trying to get across - reading this as Teddy trying to convince himself that he should be in love with her makes this piece even more interesting, because what the hell is up with that guy?

The structure of this, with the flashback and all that, is something that usually goes terribly wrong but doesn't here, so well done on that too.

Anyway, sorry for the lateness (again) and happy Thanksgiving if you celebrate it. :)

Author's Response: Hello! And no problem xD

It's good to know that even though you dodge the Teddy-Dom-Vic triangles, you chose to read this.

I am glad that you found this entertaining. I could never glorify cheating, and I hate to read stories that do, and thus I wrote this :) I am so happy that you think I have written my characters "cool" xD

Well, I leave it up to my readers to interpret whether Teddy loved Victoire, or he loved Dom, or neither. I just wanted to get across how confused and a little selfish he was. He wanted everything, yet he still didn't know what he wanted actually.

I am forever worrying whether my flashbacks work with the flow or not, but I am so relieved to know that you think that it worked fine.

Thanks a lot for reading & reviewing!

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