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Review:Uncharted says:
I love this story!!! I really like Allie, and I am so excited to see her and James' reunion (on a side note, TERRIBLE Cliffhanger. Well. Not technically. By definition it was actually rather fantastic, but it is torturous having to wait until the next chapter. Blah). I am a tad confused with Allie's American friends (I remember Jasper and Noah, but the others get kinda mixed up). I am sure that as the story progresses you will further develop them though :) Anyway, I really like your story, and cannot wait for you to update! ...Which you should do soon. Really soon. Only fair with that cliffhanger :P

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like Allie, I'm trying my best to show you her personality but I have to admit that it's hard sometimes. It's hard to bring out the good traits when you're writing in first person because the character often seem boastful or arrogant.

I know I haven't introduced them properly but they'll have bigger parts in the story further along. I've also added some short info about them in the next A/N :)


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