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Review:LoveToRead says:
I absolutly love this story! I think you have described Lily perfectly, and also the situation with the 'Love Hate' relationship between herself and James is amazingly written. The only thing I think woud be not in Lily's nature is when she went out with Sirius. But honestly it doesn't bother me much, it creates a brillant twist. One of my favourite Lily/James fanfics so far.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review it means loads to me :) In response to your comment about it not being in Lily's nature to go out with Sirius, here's a bit of background information for you that wasn't in the story: Lily always knew James loved her but she never thought she would love him back. When, in the second chapter, she hexed him for coming into her dorm, she got that feeling she'd only had once before with a Muggle boy before she came to Hogwarts. She didn't like the feeling because it was for James, so she decided turn rebel and go out with Sirius. Partly so she could show James she didn't like him and partly because she hoped she would fall in love with Sirius in the meantime. She only loved him a little and found that she did love James and no one else. In the end she decided to fess up to James that she loved him. I hope that helped. Again, thanks for reviewing and the next chapter should be up soon x

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