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Review:RonWeasleyFans says:
The story so far is quite a good idea, but i'm having trouble understanding sometimes because you change from past to present tense quite a lot. Maybe try and work on your grammar and put she said or he said after they have spoken or the reader gets confused as to who is speaking. Well done on the storyline though :)

Author's Response: very very sorry for dat :"( thiz is mah 1st fanfic i'll try 2 improve

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