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Review:Gabriella Hunter says:
Hello!

So I've come to the end. There's always a bit of sadness when I come to the end of a good story and this isn't any different even though I know that there are some sequels waiting for me. I'm really grateful to you for taking the time so slowly instead of jumping on ahead to a few quick scenes and then ending the story altogether. I had a book end like that on me a while back and totally freaked out because I didn't get a feeling of closure! I think I tossed it somewhere in my room...
Anyway. Its great seeing that the boys have finally gotten treated a bit better after what happened at dinner and the events leading to the Hunt's demise. I wasn't surprised by some of the older Gryffindor's reactions to them either, they seem awfully stubborn that way. Hahaha.
But I think the boys, by that time had obviously had enough of being famous and I couldn't blame them. And their thoughts, while a bit dark on some things, especially with Tregeagle still in recovery. I'd like to know a bit more about that myself and some of his family history, maybe there's more to be revealed? Hoping so! :D
Anyway, I don't know what a Spice Girl is either, just as a random thing. They weren't a group I was too fond of. Haha.
Right. They won the Championship! Great game by the way, I don't know how you do it, I would have expired several paragraphs ago. I envy you...
There's still a few questions towards that ending that I think you purposely left open for us and I really like that you did. It makes me even more excited for the sequels! :D
But, really, all in all this was a wonderful and very unique NG and I'm really happy that you wrote it. There are alot of stories with the Weasley kids and such and I fall into that cliche myself with my own NG but I can't resist bullying my Misfits. Moving on! You're truly gifted and I'm going to be keeping an eye on you.
Freaky?
I do believe so!
Be sure to check your closet tonight! >:D
Much love,
Gabbie

Author's Response: Nothing worse than an unresolved plotline, right? There's a few questions that still need to be answered - particularly about Josh Tregeagle - but seeing as they're only questions that have been asked in the last couple of chapters, I'm sure they can wait...

Spice Girls were horrendous; I just needed a poor pun as a one-liner for a bit of levity before I heaped some more misery on poor little Josh.

Sequels:
Snake Bites (2017 Next Gen) - 18 chapters in
Snakes and Ladders (2006) - 7 chapters in

Snake Bites is getting all of my attention at the minute, so I'd go with that one next. It also has lots more Albus/Louis...

Thanks for everything

Sheriff


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