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Review:Shindig says:
Hi! First off, I really liked your banner. It's awesome.

I like where you're going with this plot. It's funny, and I like the idea of house rivalry. You've got the snark in her.

However, a bit of criticism. I know it's joking around and everything, but sometimes having a joke or snarky comment every two lines makes it hard to read. Maybe reach into her thoughts quickly about what's out the window or something; it doesn't alwasy have to expand the plot. Also, don't overdo her character. Even though I like the snark, you can tone it down a little to make her a little more realistic.

That said, I do like this story, and I'll be keeping tabs on it.

Shindig :D

Author's Response: Same haha. Yeah i get what you mean i suppose, ill try to rectify that in the future i'm just not the best at trailing thoughts etc. unfortunately but obviously i'll try hard haha. Thanks for the review :)

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