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Review:shadowycorner says:
Hey, here for the tag.

I think this is a wonderful premise and idea. Taking a character we know nothing about and connecting her with a well-known and well-loved character always makes for an interesting story. I can believe that Madam Pomfrey felt more symptahy toward Remus than any other of her patients because of his affliction. Some of his emotions were nicely described. But there were a few glaring errors that took away from the story, and also the fact that we didn't learn anything new, because we all knew these things. it's like madame pomfrey just recited what happened to Remus, without revealing her perspective on it and her emotions and background. I think you should re-visit this fic and give it some thought, and then it could be really great. Kudos for coming up with an idea I haven't seen before. It grabbed my attention right away. When a writer has unique ideas, it's always a great thing.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and a lot of people said that there was errors, I just didn't get to them yet.

again, thanks.
~Phoenix


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