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Review:MargaretLane says:
Hmm, the premise of this story is pretty interesting and the summary makes me wonder what the cause is going to be.

Couple of mistakes in the first couple of lines. You've referred to "Potter's" and "Weasley's" when it should be "Potters" and "Weasleys". The apostrophe is for when you are talking about something belonging to them, like "that's Potter's book", not for when it's plural.

*grins at "a pain-filled trance"* I like that phrase.

Also love the part about "it's not that they're bad cooks..." and then he says that they are actually. *laughs*

*grins at Molly fussing over the cake in the oven*

You also have "just bare with it", when it should be "just bear with it".

Aw, poor Albus. He's going to be picked on forever because of that.

Author's Response: Haha oops! My bad, I usually don't make that mistake with the apostrophes :S Thanks or pointing it out! And the 'bear with it' thing! I'll edit that as soon as possible :)

I love the fact that you find my story funny, that's made my day quite a bit better (I've had quite a bad day today) so thank you so much :D My aim was to make people laugh with this story so yay! So happy you like it!

Yeah... bless his little cotton socks. :)

Thank you so much again for the lovely review, it's really helped!

~Siriusly


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