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Review:PhoenixPulse says:
Hey Lovely!

Okay, I've been bad at reviewing these past few weeks because I've been so caught up with school, and I felt as if I've abandoned you, hanging on a clothesline. Well,


And I read your response to my last review for this story, don't worry about it being cliched. I love it. To be honest, it's one of the most well written cliched stories on here. And because I like it so far, I WILL continue reading.

Don't feel ashamed about this story. Your writing is still lovely despite the cliches. It flows well, your characterization is great...everything's just fine. Don't let the cliches bother you. I'm guilty of writing them myself.

And I love the little Lord of the Rings reference. Very funny indeed! Speaking of LOTR, I haven't seen that movie in forever. I have a growing urgency to go watch it now...

And I hope Larissa tells the truth soon. It doesn't do well to hide everything.

And the mushrooms conversation! That was GREAT!

Anywho, lovely chapter! And yes, I will continue reading this, despite your begging me not to read it. Why? Because it really is interesting!

Wiff all lurve!

Pearl :)

Author's Response: Please, I feel so bad about MY lack of reviewing! I've read chapter six but I haven't been able to review it! I really need to do it but I'm so busy at the moment! I will be reviewing soon though!

yeahh... I had a bad day (read: month) with this story and I had a massive rant-y thing but then someone was saying I should try and keep going so that's what I did. :p I don't think I will abandon this but it will probably be one of those stories that updates very infrequently. :p

These early chapters were before I had word on my computer, so I had A LOT of grammatical and spelling errors, and when I edited it, it was like 2-3 in the morning so it probably is still in dire need of editing. :p

ahh, Lord of the Rings, I've never actually read/watched all of them, only fragments but we all know that reference so I just chucked it in there. ;)

Wait and see. ;)

ahahaha, I don't even KNOW what went through my mind when I wrote that conversation with the mushrooms! I think I ate something stale and went insane... :p

ahaha, I will hopefully be reviewing your story very soon! I just quickly came on here to respond to my unanswered reviews! :D

Thanks for reviewing again, you're actually the best! ♥

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