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Review:Jchrissy says:
This is absolutely wonderful/heartbreaking. This is one of those deaths that I'll never understand. Sirius's half killed me, but I get it. I still don't think he should have died but I understand the necessity of taking every single thing from Harry so when it came to that final moment, he could die without hesitation. But Fred. Fred. . The worst part is is that it's not just Fred it killed, but George too. Because really, how is someone supposed to be okay after losing so much of them?

The entire section of them discussing death, making jokes out of it that weren't really jokes was extremely beautiful but with the bittersweet pain that I'm sure you intended. Because it doesn't happen that way. They don't go out blazing, fireworks and all. Ugh. Too painful ;(.

I really liked your odd structure. I love the break up of sentences and the poetic bits and the fact that it really just was as chaotic as the twins were. I think it fit your story perfectly.

I'll definitely be coming back for the next chapter!

Jami

Author's Response: Hello Jami,

thank you so much for your lovely review :D

Yes, I've been pretty shredded by Fred's death as well, and how it must have affected George :( So much so that I've been driven to write this story. I don't know how successful or convincing I'll be in writing about the twins (they're such difficult characters to write!), especially post-Hogwarts post-war twins. And one of them being dead and all...

I'm glad you liked the structure of the story; I've just been experimenting around with it (to make the story hopefully less monotonous since not a lot has happened so far) and hopefully it doesn't go overboard or anything like it :)

Thank you so much once again; your review means heaps to me :D And I do hope you keep reading and enjoy the future chapters just as much!

-teh


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