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Review:CassiePotter says:
Hello Gabbie! Yay I'm the first review! Woohoo!
I really, really loved this chapter! I think we get to the core of Roxanne and Benjamin's relationship, since neither of them are very romantic people, and they both have nasty tempers. The flashback was brilliant, and I loved seeing how they met, and the contrast between Fred's hatred for Ben, and Roxie's patents' acceptance. And it's interesting that it's easier for Ben to deal with the hatred. I also want to know what's going on with his family! Are we ever going to find out more about that? The end of this chapter was crazy and intense and wonderful, and I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm working on ASOS, and I'll let you know when I put it in the queue! 10/10
Cassie :)

Author's Response: Hello!

Hey, Cassie! You attacked this chapter alot sooner than I would have thought! I'd finished it a while ago and thought, "Meh, no one is going to like this" but you do! :D I send you fat kittens!
Yep, we really got a feeling for Roxanne and Benjamin in this chapter and how they feel about being tied to one another.
I think its really scary for both of them and their tempers are so well-matched that its like gas and fire. They shouldn't be left alone for too long! Hahaha.
Loved that you enjoyed the flashback but they'd already met before but I sort of extended on the previous chapter's flashback I think. But its whatever, I think this flashback gave a better depth to how they felt about each other then.
I think I'll go into more detail about Perce aka Fred the Second's hatred for Ben, there's alot more to it that I hadn't thought of before but have decided to put into the story.
Roxie's parents are something aren't they? They don't hate Benjamin at all but they're not the sort to stop their children from being happy.
Or spoiled to the core, hahaha.
There's alot going on with Benjamin's family right now and I'll slowly, slowly, painstakingly slowly get into more detail about it! Hahaha. Sorry, but I'm a tease! ;)
Ah, that ending...I'd thought that I'd pushed it too far for a minute but it turned out better than I'd thought. I didn't want to hurt Roxie but then again, I thought, "Who am I kidding? I'm Gabbie Hunter and I torture my females without a care for their feelings!" mwhahahahaha.
Ooh, ASOS?! That's got me really excited! Oh, and expect an update (Finally) on "Memories" that one story I had with George/Angie and the others. It should be up by tomorrow!
Thanks for continuing to come back! Your awesome!
Much love,
Gabbie


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